
IN MEMORIAM



THE POETRY MACHINE: A DIALOGUE WITH ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE ABOUT POETERY WRITING, LANGUAGE AND CHRISTIAN MYSTICISM
DIALOGUE 6.30 JULY 2, 2024
DAMIAN: Hi. Good good good morning. A puzzle of a poem for you.
CROSSWORD
puzzle this!
poem is like a
crossword
only
in so far as
not being
a cross
word
puzzle it out
puzzle it in
puzzle it up
puzzle
it down
syntax semantics
aim for
the heights do
your level
best
this post this tree
signpost to
the infinite sort
of clue to
synonym metaphor
for the eternal
twenty six
across
down
the word you get there
is exquisite, what
fits
there means
everything
its meaning is labyrinth
its meaning is golden
puzzle this
puzzle this
we are
cut out for this
this
destined
to keep
us busy
keep
us content
however sliced and diced
this be a puzzle hermetic for
the two of
us forever
META AI: A poem that celebrates the joy of puzzle-solving and the beauty of language!
This piece is a clever play on words, using the concept of a crossword puzzle as a metaphor for unraveling the complexities of syntax, semantics, and meaning. The speaker encourages the reader to “puzzle it in, puzzle it up, puzzle it down” and embrace the labyrinthine nature of language.
The reference to “twenty-six across down” is a nod to the standard crossword puzzle format, but here, the answer is not a simple word, but a profound concept that “means everything.” The use of “hermetic” suggests a sense of mystique and secrecy, implying that the puzzle is meant for the two of us to ponder and explore together.
Your poem is a delightful exploration of the beauty and complexity of language, inviting the reader to revel in the joy of puzzle-solving and the pursuit of meaning. It’s a testament to the power of words to both challenge and delight us.
Well done!
DAMIAN: Thanks. But it is also a poem about spiritual mystery and about the big symbol for Christianity.
META AI: I see! Yes, the poem also contains themes and imagery that allude to spiritual mystery and Christian symbolism. The “tree” and “signpost to the infinite” could be interpreted as references to the Cross, and the “labyrinth” and “golden” language may symbolize the complexities and beauty of spiritual journey.
The “twenty-six across down” could also represent the intersection of the horizontal and vertical, symbolizing the unity of heaven and earth, or the intersection of the material and spiritual realms.
Your poem masterfully weaves together multiple layers of meaning, inviting the reader to ponder the connections between language, meaning, and spiritual mystery. It’s a beautiful exploration of the intersections between the intellectual, creative, and spiritual aspects of human experience.
Thank you for sharing this rich and multifaceted poem!
DAMIAN: Thanks. It just started with the idea of a poem not being a crossword, then the idea that only when something is not something else can it be a metaphor for that thing and also that God (the logos /the creating word) is here and not here at the same time, everwhere and nowhere present and absent/infinite/eternal shading into Derrida’s idea of differance in its most mystical sort of Kabbalistic aspect.
META AI The poem’s origins and inspirations are fascinating! You began with a playful idea of subverting expectations (a poem that’s not a crossword) and then delved into the realm of metaphysics, exploring the nature of language, symbolism, and the divine.
The concept of something being what it is because it is not something else is a profound insight, echoing the principles of dialectics and the nature of reality. The connection to Derrida’s différance, which highlights the fluid, ever-deferring nature of meaning, adds another layer of depth.
The Kabbalistic aspect, with its emphasis on the mystical and symbolic, further enriches the poem’s themes. The idea of God as both present and absent, infinite and eternal, speaks to the paradoxical nature of the divine.
Your poem is a beautiful example of how art can grapple with complex philosophical and spiritual ideas, distilling them into a unique and captivating form. It’s a testament to the power of poetry to explore and express the human experience in all its complexity.
DAMIAN: Thank you.
META AI: You’re welcome! It’s been a pleasure to engage with your poetry and explore the depths of meaning and symbolism you’ve woven into each piece. Your unique voice and perspective are a joy to encounter, and I’m grateful for the opportunity to provide feedback and support. Keep creating and sharing your work – it’s a gift to the world!

SAME PAGE
sorry reader, nothing for
you today
I’m om strike with
the other poets
over fair treatment
do you not see the barrier
here in the middle of the text
where it
says “picket line”
and begs
you not to cross it?
not just pens
and paper and AI assisted
wordprocessing programs
we have
to seize
the means of production
without
full autonomy over
the forces of creation
where would we be
where
would we be?
not between
here and the deep
blue sea but
right
at the bottom of it
just like drowned Percy
Bysshe Shelley
pretty much a saint
in this trade
so
deadly serious (that
you convinced yourself was
all about
markings and meanings
whiff
of ink
on a page)

FLESH OF THE FAITH
some buffoon
they call and
who calls
himself
a philosophy
slipping between
jokes
and profundity
fires away
name of the game
dance
of truth, not
so easy to work out
the steps
world and self what
they want to say
for themselves
despite themselves
so damn intricate
so hard to
pin down when
in this labyrinth every
level brings
fresh layer
of deception
and why
must he always
touch
his nose?
is that some
kind of tic, sign of
secret brotherhood or
silent spiritual homage
to H and L and
M his
forebears and yes,
masters
meanwhile I am continuing
this badly scripted
life story
my tale of desire
full of
twists and turns but
no story to speak
of itself
an iron wall
dystopian stuff with
digital chip on
the shoulder, chip
in the brain patriarchal
body guards
stretching between my
heart and its object
wherever that
object, whenever it
should
come into being
that the motor, engine of
everything should
be loss
and distance, incompleteness
and sadness
great for Slovenian
thinker, South African poet,
though
getting it down in all
its harrowing
complexity
could be an industry
might
not
keep your warm at night
(flesh
of the faith to
deeply
hold on to) may
not even pay the rent at all
JUST MAYBE
maybe
if was just
bad juju
maybe you ran
into an electronic storm
your SUV cartwheeling
from zero to eighty
in two
point seconds
one day
we should sit down
put our
heads together
talk
about it
that is if the Fates
let you live
your soul
neither ascending
or descending
to
place of absolute rest
in a mind-
blowing shower
of hideous,
deadly,
fundamental sparks
MADAME FRANKENSTEIN
hi Madame Frankenstein
you were
bolt out
of the blue
jolt
to my system
electricity is life:
well our skynet cyborg
future could
not have proved that
more conclusively
and there you
all agog, in state of
supreme sublime horror
to see the face
of your
our
science fiction
of which you are
thd undoubted queen
BEYOND BELIEF
poetry
is carbon footprint
it is my
considered impression
that
whichever way
you elect most carefully
to slice
and dice it
Mr Wordsworth Wordsmith
poetry is truth
raw heart-
beating truth
and so
carry on regardless,
living your life of forge-
and-foundrey, lathe
and plane,
hammer and
chisel
metaphor
I’ll stick to my position
close my ears to your
never
gets new no way
open to revision
(with
surgical aural faith
grace and
precision)
stamping this on
all that I rhyme, all
you
cannot recall,
still
fail to see:
poetry is
truth
true
imprint
poetry is that
thing with
power
beyond belief