post YouTube we live in a differenf Universe where aliens fly through our atmosphere like sardines in the sea
and there is great conspiracy to create the ultimate conspiracy in theory we know just how diabolical this can be
so just sit back, relax watch on two screens so you can becoms your own twin-slit experiment you may not know her beyond her avatar but you do seem hopelessly entangled
and if those sweet words professing love eternal spiritual sustenance and emotional protection
sound too good to.be true don’t worry my child, soon they will tweak your bestie rework their AI and soon you will be squabbling so intimately human
and film of the poem are no longer talking to each other
film of the poem is still in embryo stuck in the concept stage
the scriptwriter is trying to hook a producer’s interest presenting a synopsis
everyone is wondering how much of poem should be dropped, how much embellished in order to produce an adaptation that does not just do justice but extends, re- interprets (without going full Charlie Kaufman)
metaphor synechdoche
we can open with a tracking shot to outdo Orson Welles or Robert Altman
lingering seemingly forever of each of the seventeen syllables all of the three
so deeply impacted revelation is going to be extinction level be seismological
and there we are (time as we now see thing quite unreal)
looking down from the reverse slope of Devil’s Peak out over the flat suburbs (dust and sand of ocean reclaimed)
but your mind is far into the interior digging up the bones that tell us pain is history; history pain
somehow they cannot convert your cerebral into spectacle no technicolour out there to match your austere
somehow intensity here has of necessity to be sharp and sweet
somehow these titanic currents, seas meeting twisting, contorting
all going to flow ultimately transformed in that wash
for now so precious little melding, blending hope for the rude rudiments of a comfort zone (plane almost scraping the lids off shanties take offs and landings whole other, true, South Africa cannot just wish away)
and there you are delivered of all our quandaries all our questions bitter conundrums
absorbing the crimson sunset light in your paradise of refuge
do you not think of us recall what was lived through?
take a last look our way
scan sky far to the West where Sun is forever setting